A great effort - you do well to reflect how you researched the star image and how you wanted this represented in your music video. The presentation covers this process well. There is however, little content on the planning of the music video and explanation as to why this was needed - to organise the shoot and realise the end product. I feel that you need to revise what the conventions of the music video are - refer to class notes as the ones you state in the presentation are not accurate - please revise. Do ensure your presentation is consistent with font use and spellchecked.
Tom
ReplyDeleteA great effort - you do well to reflect how you researched the star image and how you wanted this represented in your music video. The presentation covers this process well. There is however, little content on the planning of the music video and explanation as to why this was needed - to organise the shoot and realise the end product. I feel that you need to revise what the conventions of the music video are - refer to class notes as the ones you state in the presentation are not accurate - please revise. Do ensure your presentation is consistent with font use and spellchecked.